johandark's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragon Ball Multiverse 1]

It´s really amazing, probably not professional. But it Rocks!

I´m JohanDark the artist of the Special Universe 1 of Dragon Ball Multiverse. (the one of the Kaioshins that is now been published in Multiverse).

My only critic would be that there are some moments that you stop the animation... basically when there is the kame ha or the big bang attacks... and then when there is a conversation with the vargas you go really Fast and it´s hard to follow reading.

Congratulations for your effort! ;) But don´t be hurry... try to make great art before do faster art... People would apreciate it more! ;) and you are doing a great job. Thanks!

bocodamondo responds:

oh hey ^^ yeah im watching your special sor. its pretty good :)

.but yeah your critic is right. however this is just my first try ofcourse. and since i read all the critics from all the guys here
i know what i did wrong here . wich of course will result me to avoid those in Episode 2 to make it better :)

thanks

[Umichan Dark Winter]

Good Animation... Strange Story...

I don´t know if you are telling a story having in mind that people now already the character Umi-Chan... but i don´t really understand the story very much...

The animation is cool, and works really well with the music. Voices are really cool but with a low level was difficult to listen them, even the pretty voice of Nakoruru.

but as Slaanash said... I do not know why but draws attention so that you look to the end. Probally is the good animation, probally the great smoke and the velocity of the animaiton with the music, but the result is Cool. and that´s what matters.

Good Job.

Vortex00 responds:

thanks man. I'm working on more animations starting from the beginning.

[Pico against the animator]

... It´s really Freaky...

I mean... There´s very quality in this page, draws could be better, buildings, story and rest... But wel... I don´t know... I didn´t like it.

nicksoul responds:

thank you man!